The Novel Help Thread

wooness

Any one else need help with anything?

i can't think of nothing at the moment

hmmm Well how bout you guys tell me if you like this idea.

Two kids get sent to this elite school for the gifted. they quickly find out that all the other students how powers, abilitties that the two kids though were only in story books. They end up being the smartest kids in the school with no powers, or are they? through a series of torments and deaths they slowly start to find out their powers. The biggest problem is, how do you learn about yourself when the very buildings around you are trying to crush you within their walls.

or something. its not a very good pharagraph but yeah

Oh is this with Ralph and Cat? ^^ I like it, except for the line "The biggest problem is, how do you learn about yourself...etc." I feel like that isn't the biggest problem. You should make that line really exciting, like "the biggest problem is that the school is going to explode." Well, don't use that, but you know what I mean. Make that last line more awesome. If that makes sense. But I really like the idea though!

lol yeah its cat and ralph

well like i said, bad pharagraph. a better way to say it is.

While trying to learn about themselves their crushed from the very place they take safe haven.

never move into a place that is a living building. it'll keep you up all night talking lol

i think i'm lost =^^=

lol thats ok. its about one of my trilogys that i've writen

oh i got ya now. kk

lol yep yep ^^

Oh you finished it already? I didn't know that. o.o

oh yeah i've finished Onyx Crest E.S.H.G. -- Catharine and Ralph's story already. been done for about a year now.

I'm working on my second script

Awesome whats going to happen?

well, here is a run through. the kids are graduating college and they have made friends with Nessa, Ryan, and Haylie. Now, basically, the kids are telling stories to Nessa and them because they are graduating on the day that their friends were killed 3 years ago. so they return and weird shit starts to happen again

lol sounds fun ^^

much fun

is it gonna be scary o.o

indeed

good! well if you need help with anything just post it!

alright, i shall. its still in the works so not a lot is written but i got ideas

whats your ideas?

Any kinks need working out?

well, they (chels and chris) have a grad party and Nessa (Chelsea's friend) wants to know about the old house (and they are going back to the beach house) but this time, Chelsea's car suspiciously runs out of gas in front of the old house, so its the same thing all over again with more thrills and chills (plus neighbors will be involved along with demons and spirits)

i think you should have it they think their going a different way and still some how end up there. Otherwise why would they even go by the house

yes!! thats a better idea. and the car can somehow breakdown SLASHED TIRES!!