some potry from today

lol i hate it when u guys speak so intellgently, makes me feel so stupid . lol

(the goblin wrote stupidly too, as nothing made him feel old quite so quickly as writing correctly, replying "...I seem to get younger as I go along then, I used to be much older but I'm younger now..." adding "...so where's the next poem then...")

haha working on i

here is another one

So with the blood coursing through my veins,
When i Die and they drain it away,
My bloodless, beat-less heart will love you still today,
with my last, gasping breath, I'll speak three words,
"I love you" and i know this feeling true,
Even with my bloodless, beat-less heart,
And my barren dry lungs,
Even when you shatter my heart,
the pieces still felt love for you,
But yet, another hand has fixed the broken pieces,
And now my heart feels love for two...

and may i just say for reisng this this morning its not to bad

nice poems. I'd try, but i can never peice together how i feel..and poems were never my thing lol..

So with the blood coursing through my veins,
When i Die and they drain it away,
My bloodless, beat-less heart will love you still today,
with my last, gasping breath, I'll speak three words,
"I love you" and i know this feeling true,
Even with my bloodless, beat-less heart,
And my barren dry lungs,
Even when you shatter my heart,
the pieces still felt love for you,
But yet, another hand has fixed the broken pieces,
And now my heart feels love for two...

-jes a.k.a woot-

thats cute

("...just the idea of the heart growing through snow..." mentioned the goblin, adding "...any more poems...")

hmmmm
i gotta think of some
or find my book O.o