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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:05 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:15 pm

Any one else need help with anything?
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:18 am

i can't think of nothing at the moment
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:44 am

hmmm Well how bout you guys tell me if you like this idea.

Two kids get sent to this elite school for the gifted. they quickly find out that all the other students how powers, abilitties that the two kids though were only in story books. They end up being the smartest kids in the school with no powers, or are they? through a series of torments and deaths they slowly start to find out their powers. The biggest problem is, how do you learn about yourself when the very buildings around you are trying to crush you within their walls.

or something. its not a very good pharagraph but yeah
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:33 pm

Oh is this with Ralph and Cat? ^^ I like it, except for the line "The biggest problem is, how do you learn about yourself...etc." I feel like that isn't the biggest problem. You should make that line really exciting, like "the biggest problem is that the school is going to explode." Well, don't use that, but you know what I mean. Make that last line more awesome. If that makes sense. But I really like the idea though!
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:32 pm

lol yeah its cat and ralph

well like i said, bad pharagraph. a better way to say it is.

While trying to learn about themselves their crushed from the very place they take safe haven.

never move into a place that is a living building. it'll keep you up all night talking lol
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:51 pm

i think i'm lost =^^=
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:50 pm

lol thats ok. its about one of my trilogys that i've writen
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:03 pm

oh i got ya now. kk
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:11 pm

lol yep yep ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:17 pm

Oh you finished it already? I didn't know that. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:20 am

oh yeah i've finished Onyx Crest E.S.H.G. -- Catharine and Ralph's story already. been done for about a year now.
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:29 pm

I'm working on my second script
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:42 pm

Awesome whats going to happen?
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:51 pm

well, here is a run through. the kids are graduating college and they have made friends with Nessa, Ryan, and Haylie. Now, basically, the kids are telling stories to Nessa and them because they are graduating on the day that their friends were killed 3 years ago. so they return and weird shit starts to happen again
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:05 pm

lol sounds fun ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:33 pm

much fun
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:58 pm

is it gonna be scary o.o
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:36 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:53 pm

good! well if you need help with anything just post it!
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:22 pm

alright, i shall. its still in the works so not a lot is written but i got ideas
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:01 am

whats your ideas?

Any kinks need working out?
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:33 pm

well, they (chels and chris) have a grad party and Nessa (Chelsea's friend) wants to know about the old house (and they are going back to the beach house) but this time, Chelsea's car suspiciously runs out of gas in front of the old house, so its the same thing all over again with more thrills and chills (plus neighbors will be involved along with demons and spirits)
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:22 pm

i think you should have it they think their going a different way and still some how end up there. Otherwise why would they even go by the house
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PostSubject: Re: The Novel Help Thread   Mon Sep 14, 2009 5:57 pm

yes!! thats a better idea. and the car can somehow breakdown SLASHED TIRES!!
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