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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:07 pm | |
| I love you... I care a lot.. This is farewell... I gave all I got... I'm sorry I messed up... I feel like s***... I've decided to quit... Leave this world... This is it.. Live and be happy... I want you to... You aren't mine... But I'm always yours... Heart to Heart... Body to body... Me to you... Sad that we're through... One last kiss... Is all you gave... Nothing you can... to ever save... I gave one option... I must go now... You are my world... No matter what... I'll always love you...
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fleamailman Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!

Posts: 963 Join date: 2010-01-23
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:20 pm | |
| ("...it's beautiful..." said the goblin, "...what about a matching picture then, no rush, just keep you eye out, and if you ever come across a picture that reminds you of this poem, pinch it, try it out, and if it perfect, the work is illustrated, remember the work only has to please one person now, the one who has to live with it...") |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Tue Jan 26, 2010 9:40 pm | |
| I always write my own poems... I have many ways of expressing myself... |
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Sage Mentor of Creative Being

Posts: 143 Join date: 2010-01-21 Location: Overseer's Cloud
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| I hope you don't mind, but i added a poll as well as edited one word.
i read your poem and i see that it came from the heart. good job. _________________ Never equate death with stopping.
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:34 pm | |
| Why did you do that to my poem? I liked it better with the curses... It makes it have more feeling to it... And I would prefer you remove the poll... I'd prefer people write and tell me if my poems suck.. not rate so that I can see it sucks...
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SilentxMidnight Keeper of the Crypt

Posts: 1270 Join date: 2009-07-04 Age: 18 Location: The Wonderful World of Word
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:45 pm | |
| Dear, we must be age friendly. and there are some walls up so some curses are automatically changed. |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Poem: Winter's Deadly Numbness. Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:24 pm | |
| The frost's bite... 'Til morning's light... The winter chill.... A strange sensation... What a thrill... Tingling skin... Red warm blood... Pooled out onto... A blanket on pure white... The winter tells a story... A story of love and death... A story of hate and regret... "Young child, don't fret..." said the voice in her head... "Soon all will be over...Soon you shall be dead..." |
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fleamailman Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!

Posts: 963 Join date: 2010-01-23
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:50 pm | |
| ("...ah, another beautiful post human..." said the goblin, adding "...come and post it on the "last post" thread here, we need your talent now, and I would just like those who don't normally look at poetry to see poems too, what say you then, if you like I can try to help you choose that perfect picture now, and you can still post here as well...") |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:21 pm | |
| The dark-haired young woman stares at the goblin, "I wish to spread my feelings to the world..." |
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fleamailman Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!

Posts: 963 Join date: 2010-01-23
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:24 pm | |
| "But I'll crush you if I climb upon your back... " Said the nameless young woman with black hair and bright eyes. |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:37 pm | |
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fleamailman Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!

Posts: 963 Join date: 2010-01-23
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:46 pm | |
| ("...ah now, it is too late child, you have already kept you promise, I will keep mine too now, hope you like it..." mentioned the goblin) Winter's Deadly NumbnessThe frost's bite... 'Til morning's light... The winter chill.... A strange sensation... What a thrill... Tingling skin... Red warm blood... Pooled out onto... A blanket on pure white... The winter tells a story... A story of love and death... A story of hate and regret... "Young child, don't fret..." said the voice in her head... "Soon all will be over...Soon you shall be dead..." - Silent_GoodnightKiss - 
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:19 pm | |
| Ah...Such a beautiful picture... Such a beautiful one that fits it perfect... |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy Following the Cruse of Muse

Posts: 187 Join date: 2009-10-24 Age: 17 Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
 | Subject: </3 Bethany Renee Eplin's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem) Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:56 pm | |
| Falling Apart I am falling apart... I am fading away... I just want to stay... Maybe one day... This will all get fixed... We are meant to be... Maybe I can fix it... But I'm really stupid... And it's hard to face it... but like they say... What is meant to be will find it's way.. Hmm...Sure... Maybe one day...
The Best Friend One day, this little girl... Met this little boy... She was about 5... He was about 8... they talked, and walked... That little girl... Fell for that little boy's smile... She became his best friend... she grew up... So did he... There were family feud... And only those two... They never wanted to lose... but sometimes they choose... but they are always friends... and will be until the end... But as they get older... Mistakes are made... She was 12... He was 15... More mistakes and less smiles... She never wanted to lose him... the boy went away for a while... then came back two years later... She is 14... He is 17... He was her best friend again... A few mistakes... They shouldn't have made... Started with a kiss; Ended in a fight... But they still loved eachother... Dec. 7th, 2009- their hands fit perfectly together... He said they were soulmates.... She didn't know what to say... He made a big mistake... He didn't mean to make... She wants to forgive him... She wants his apology... Now she just wants to say... The little girl... Forgives the little boy...
without You As I slur, You become a blur. As I die, You start to cry. You'll shoe one hundered tears, For all the years. We were friends, Until it ends. I was your best defence, Give me a moment of silence For the times I laid back I am dead, cut me some slack I watched you... you watched me too... Kicked a ball, Saw leaves fall, Leaned on a wall, Loved every latenight call, you've grown so tall, I've stayed so small... Your warm embrace... Gone without a trace... I stare in space... But can't find my place...
Random thinking 1 Today is here Tomorrow is near the good and bad all turned to sad I can't cry... I wonder why...
Random thinking 2 I love you You think I don't care You love me too And all the moments we share
Random thinking 3 I am yours Forever and Always I love you Maybe you love me too...
"Okay so I wrote these and don't worry; I will post more to this... Tell me what you think..." Whispered the young woman... |
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