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 </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)

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PostSubject: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sun Jan 24, 2010 3:07 pm

I love you...
I care a lot..
This is farewell...
I gave all I got...
I'm sorry I messed up...
I feel like s***...
I've decided to quit...
Leave this world...
This is it..
Live and be happy...
I want you to...
You aren't mine...
But I'm always yours...
Heart to Heart...
Body to body...
Me to you...
Sad that we're through...
One last kiss...
Is all you gave...
Nothing you can...
to ever save...
I gave one option...
I must go now...
You are my world...
No matter what...
I'll always love you...


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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:20 pm

("...it's beautiful..." said the goblin, "...what about a matching picture then, no rush, just keep you eye out, and if you ever come across a picture that reminds you of this poem, pinch it, try it out, and if it perfect, the work is illustrated, remember the work only has to please one person now, the one who has to live with it...")
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:40 pm

I always write my own poems... I have many ways of expressing myself...
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:27 pm

I hope you don't mind, but i added a poll as well as edited one word.

i read your poem and i see that it came from the heart. good job.

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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:34 pm

Why did you do that to my poem? I liked it better with the curses... It makes it have more feeling to it... And I would prefer you remove the poll... I'd prefer people write and tell me if my poems suck.. not rate so that I can see it sucks...


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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:45 pm

Dear, we must be age friendly. and there are some walls up so some curses are automatically changed.
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PostSubject: Poem: Winter's Deadly Numbness.   Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:24 pm

The frost's bite...
'Til morning's light...
The winter chill....
A strange sensation...
What a thrill...
Tingling skin...
Red warm blood...
Pooled out onto...
A blanket on pure white...
The winter tells a story...
A story of love and death...
A story of hate and regret...
"Young child, don't fret..." said the voice in her head...
"Soon all will be over...Soon you shall be dead..."
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:50 am

("...ah, another beautiful post human..." said the goblin, adding "...come and post it on the "last post" thread here, we need your talent now, and I would just like those who don't normally look at poetry to see poems too, what say you then, if you like I can try to help you choose that perfect picture now, and you can still post here as well...")
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:21 pm

The dark-haired young woman stares at the goblin, "I wish to spread my feelings to the world..."
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:17 pm

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The dark-haired young woman stares at the goblin, "I wish to spread my feelings to the world..."

"...then climb onto my back and together we'll away..." replied the goblin, adding "...except that the "last post" thread is a strange creature, where many others will look upon it from elsewhere as it entwines you into its fabric, to post there is simply to publish, you understand that now..."

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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:24 pm

"But I'll crush you if I climb upon your back... " Said the nameless young woman with black hair and bright eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:37 pm

Oh...Well then...
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:46 pm

("...ah now, it is too late child, you have already kept you promise, I will keep mine too now, hope you like it..." mentioned the goblin)



Winter's Deadly Numbness
The frost's bite...
'Til morning's light...
The winter chill....
A strange sensation...
What a thrill...
Tingling skin...
Red warm blood...
Pooled out onto...
A blanket on pure white...
The winter tells a story...
A story of love and death...
A story of hate and regret...
"Young child, don't fret..." said the voice in her head...
"Soon all will be over...Soon you shall be dead..."

- Silent_GoodnightKiss -



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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:19 pm

Ah...Such a beautiful picture... Such a beautiful one that fits it perfect...
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PostSubject: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:56 pm

Falling Apart
I am falling apart...
I am fading away...
I just want to stay...
Maybe one day...
This will all get fixed...
We are meant to be...
Maybe I can fix it...
But I'm really stupid...
And it's hard to face it...
but like they say...
What is meant to be will find it's way..
Hmm...Sure...
Maybe one day...

The Best Friend
One day, this little girl...
Met this little boy...
She was about 5...
He was about 8...
they talked, and walked...
That little girl...
Fell for that little boy's smile...
She became his best friend...
she grew up...
So did he...
There were family feud...
And only those two...
They never wanted to lose...
but sometimes they choose...
but they are always friends...
and will be until the end...
But as they get older...
Mistakes are made...
She was 12...
He was 15...
More mistakes and less smiles...
She never wanted to lose him...
the boy went away for a while...
then came back two years later...
She is 14...
He is 17...
He was her best friend again...
A few mistakes...
They shouldn't have made...
Started with a kiss; Ended in a fight...
But they still loved eachother...
Dec. 7th, 2009- their hands fit perfectly together...
He said they were soulmates....
She didn't know what to say...
He made a big mistake...
He didn't mean to make...
She wants to forgive him...
She wants his apology...
Now she just wants to say...
The little girl...
Forgives the little boy...

without You
As I slur,
You become a blur.
As I die,
You start to cry.
You'll shoe one hundered tears,
For all the years.
We were friends,
Until it ends.
I was your best defence,
Give me a moment of silence
For the times I laid back
I am dead, cut me some slack
I watched you...
you watched me too...
Kicked a ball,
Saw leaves fall,
Leaned on a wall,
Loved every latenight call,
you've grown so tall,
I've stayed so small...
Your warm embrace...
Gone without a trace...
I stare in space...
But can't find my place...

Random thinking 1
Today is here
Tomorrow is near
the good and bad
all turned to sad
I can't cry...
I wonder why...

Random thinking 2
I love you
You think I don't care
You love me too
And all the moments we share

Random thinking 3
I am yours
Forever and Always
I love you
Maybe you love me too...


"Okay so I wrote these and don't worry; I will post more to this... Tell me what you think..." Whispered the young woman...


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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:16 pm

You are a beautiful writer my dear...Wrtie a poem aand bring it to me plz! I love you... Live in the present not the past my dear....

~faintly whispers~ I love you 'sister'
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:13 pm

I know, love. I have many poems that I wish to show you but you must go on my myspace blog and read some of them and then come to my house and read the 30 poems I keep hidden...I'm trying my best to live in the present... but the past keeps slapping me in the face...

I love you too, 'sister'
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:17 pm

I will try sweetnes......The past is a harsh thing for some...It is for me.. But just think about all your friends in the present...You will allways be my 'sister, sweetness, dear, and hun because I am your friend and I will allways be here...If you ever cry I will be there to whipe the tears...


~sad whisper~ Don't forget me 'sister'
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:05 pm

I am going downstairs to get the rest of my poems and I will post them here...
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:18 pm

Pleasure.......heh so hun you finally post them...


~lovenling whispers~ Dont ever forget 'sister'
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:28 pm

("...perhaps this picture then..." suggested the goblin)



("...or this one then...")



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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:32 pm

Sweetness read my poems when you get a chance...

~faint whispers~ 'sister'
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:34 pm

*was downstairs* Okay now I have to sit and type all these out...
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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:43 pm

good luck......




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PostSubject: Re: </3 Bethany's Poetry Center <3(More than one Poem)   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:51 pm

I will have to get the chance to type them all out tomorrow...
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