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PostSubject: Depressing   Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:13 pm

My friends say my poems r depressing..


Shadows dance on my pale skin...
As my tears stream down my face....
I look around only to see glaring faces...
As if looking into my soul....
Disaproving of what they see...
So cruel....So cruel...
Why are you so cruel world?


R de depressing??/
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:54 pm

Makayla, you have so much talent... HIDDEN BY YOUR WEIRDNESS AND SUPER AWESOMENESS!
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:25 pm

lolz
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:01 pm

Shadows dance on my pale skin...
As my tears stream down my face....
I look around only to see glaring faces...
As if looking into my soul....
Disapproving of what they see...
So cruel....So cruel...
Why are you so cruel world?

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:28 pm

it isn't the world that is cruel,
frank, the society we claim to be the world-
tortures us as we spin twice to reclaim our seized arm,
they grip us and never let go.
The taking of one's soul is also from society,
has anyone lost the will to change?
indeed, the "world" is cruel,
but it also provides,
incite,food, shelter, love,hatred.

Ah too, it provides everything, nothing.

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:47 pm

("...forgive me, if I try to illustrate you poems, it's simply me asking me myself "where has I seen this poem before", which is subjective of course, no two people see the same thing in the same way then, so I'm not wrong nor right, nor good or bad here, any more than the poet is, it's just subjective now, subjective need no excuse at all..." said the goblin)
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:06 pm

Oh...Please not to offended...I just grew to who I am alone clawing for ground...Hateing the world...I never was shown kindness...Nor love ...Heh..

As I look at the dark sky...
I relize I am being watch myself..
I turn to where I sense a pressence...
I see a demoned....
As I walk closer I see myself more clearer...
I just wishper "Why does this world hate me?" ...
I here a faint whisper "Because dear in this world your veiwed as a demoned like me."
As my anger rises I yell "I DIDN'T ASK TO BE BROUGHT INTO THIS WORLD!WHY PUNISH ME!"
I just hear the world laughing at me now....
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:21 pm

I am no good with people please forgive me if I offend you..I apriciat the pictures,,, Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:38 pm

dont worry i know the feeling

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:56 pm

Smile *BOOM~* OH NO! WHERE ARE MY EYEBROWS!
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:34 pm

LOLZ


i have an extra pair in case you need any

that made me gigglez



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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:37 pm

Haha... I have came close to blowing my eyebrows off... Just dont leave me alone with a lighter... Heh...
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:50 pm

same here, my friend joe had a can of stuff...idk...but he torched my eyebrows and singed my hairs using a lighter and spray...i almost killed him.

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:56 pm

When I was spraying my hair with glitter for a costum dance My friend was playing with a light...Well we all see where this goes.. but she singed the ends of my hair... I pulled out a bobby pin and almost killed her with that.. (I seem to find weapons outa everything
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